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Thursday, April 14, 2016

this my writing for term 1.

This story make me very very excited and I feel like you are going to this enjoy it! One day I went to the hobbit with my family around matamata my brother got so hungry so we stopped at the KFC. My brother eats like a beast. After we ate all the the chicken from KFC we went to matamata hobbiton we start off by going in the bus We were going to the hobbiton the bus driver was driving very fast.Then we approached hobbiton we looked inside the the hobbit hole it was so tiny that anybody can not fit In.Then we went in to bilbo baggins hole it was sorta big but anybody can fit in. After that we went to this place that you can do heaps of stuff there are barrel’s m j with bears and there a place like a bar. That you can drink there are beers and ginger beers and it called The Green Dragon when we went inside it looked beautiful one odd lady showed us all around we got so thirsty and dehydrated then she took us this place that I drank ginger beer YUM! Said myself. Then we went on the bus and then we went to this shop that has heaps of stuff that they used for the hobbit.When we approached to the store it was very very Amazing. There was stuff there like stone sword keys and everything I bought a torch And my brother bought a stone sword COOL! said brother then we went off Then we Saw Bilbo Baggins,Frodo, Sam,Legolas,Thorin,,kili and fili were fighting Azog the Defiler it was a statue but they looked fabulous I like Frodo because he look so paranoid and his his first finger got chopped off and my beast villain is Azog the defiler because he has pimples in his body Rashes and his body and his muddy and pimply he also has snot dried up it was so fun said brother and after that we went home. Thank you for hearing my writing story if you LIKED! This story then please put this in my comments below or if You DON'T LIKE! this video then ummmm ummm then I will Curse you nah I won't do that Thank You Very very much Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee