Hello my name is Aryan Prasad And this is my Blog Story I hope you or you guys will Like this story enjoy Rated G
When I woke up I said “I have to wear olden day Clothes! I have to wear olden day clothes!” I chanted.
“Ok I am coming” said my mom I wore my pants ,my shoes ,My t-shirts and my coat Then I got my
Bag and then I open the door. The my dad and he started waiting Get in the car ! my dad shouted geez Im
Coming then I shut the car door “bye!” My mom said “Bye bye” I replied then we drove off then my
To tautoro school.
When I arrived at Tautoro school I WAS LATE ! I got so frustrated that I Shout at him
Then I said we are late so what You did not wake up early my dad replayed ok then bye
I replayed back when I went to the Library I was whimpered, I got so Paranoid and Embarrassed that everybody might
Laugh “Aryan ! come over here Lloyd and Tim said” “ok I am coming then” “Nice coat” said Lloyd Thank you I replayed back
Then we did Kapa haka
And the karakia then we went into the classroom Room 5. Then the teacher gave me
Olden day worksheets, after I finished then the teacher told me to do timestable she told me to 6 times
Table I said my timestable very very fast that all of the student's mouth were drop to
The ground.
After we did olden day maths work we were playing hopscotch It was pretty cool
I played four a little while like about five or ten minutes then the bell rung. The
Bell is allot more different because the ringing and the look of it then I went out
Then I had some fresh air had some snacks then I went playing with my friends
I was playing in the park talking and and playing and and running soon after
The bell rung we have to march around the court.We were marching like Rosters shaking
Our necks
Much boring and my legs were paining.then we were done finally we are done I
In the ending we were playing olden day games my favorite one was knucklebones
And we had cake then me and my two friends went out and play.
Thank you for reading my Story if you like it put some nice comment below on my blog but if you don't like then or if there something wrong In my story
Then remind me on the comments below thank you for reading my story THE END
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Friday, July 1, 2016
Friday, May 13, 2016
A Very Interesting Story That You Should Read.
Planning Stage
Who Where When What
Who my mum,my brother and my dad
Where at home at the backyard in the dark
When at Saturday 7 pm at night
The mood at the beginning is eerie
- Main Event/idea my brother sneaking up on me while I was feeding my guinea pig
- My feelings I want to show: I was nervous The mood I want to have is suspense
2. Main Event/idea getting attacked by my brother
My feeling I want to show surprise/anger
3. Main Event/idea getting back at my brother
My feeling I want to show is cheeky and happy
In the Holidays at 7 pm one cold ,dark ,foggy, windy and mysterious night dad told me this, “Aryan! Go and feed Vanilla and Catberry’’. “Yes dad” I said with my small shivering squeaky voice. Meanwhile unknown to me This is the TIME to freak Aryan out thought my little brother ONCE AND FOR ALL MUA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He jumped out the window. I wore my black bandana, leather jacket, camo hat, glasses and leather gloves and I also carried my nerf guns. “Aryan why are You getting all of that stuff and why are you wearing odd clothes?” said mum. ‘
My Hands shook dropping all the grass down to the ground. Then when I turned I saw someone wearing vendetta mask and a black jacket and holding a crowbar!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I felt so paranoid that I would nearly pooped in my pants! Then a nerf gun bullet came out of the bush. I picked it up .
A nerf bullet I said in a shocking voice. Something is stalking me. I pointed my nerf gun at the bush. My brother wearing a vendetta mask jumped out with a nerf gun “you little pee stain”! I shouted at my brother while he chased me around the compound, in the backyard and front yard and into the house. My brother yelled, “come on fight like a man or are you a scared? that's understandable”
Take that! I shot the nerf bullet at him. “ Mommy” he yelled as he ran towards her “That's right you got nothing that's right get your punk attitude back to mommy you got nothing .” I shouted out loud .
That evening was the scariest night of my lifetime but the good news is I got my brother is back and he had to say sorry for scaring me. The bad news is I had to do chores for a whole day.Thank you for listening to
my recount if you like it then please subscribe but if you don't like it then
I will call my brother to stalk you in the house nah just kidding THANK YOU!
Thursday, April 14, 2016
this my writing for term 1.
This story make me very very excited and I feel like you are going to this enjoy it!
One day I went to the hobbit with my family around matamata my brother got so hungry so we stopped at the KFC. My brother eats like a beast. After we ate all the the chicken from KFC we went to matamata hobbiton we start off by going in the bus
We were going to the hobbiton the bus driver was driving very fast.Then we approached
hobbiton we looked inside the the hobbit hole it was so tiny that anybody can not fit
In.Then we went in to bilbo baggins hole it was sorta big but anybody can fit in.
After that we went to this place that you can do heaps of stuff there are barrel’s m j with bears and there a place like a bar. That you can drink there are beers and ginger beers and it called The Green Dragon when we went inside it looked beautiful one odd lady showed us all around we got so thirsty and dehydrated then she took us this place that I drank ginger beer YUM! Said myself.
Then we went on the bus and then we went to this shop that has heaps of stuff that they used for the hobbit.When we approached to the store it was very very
Amazing. There was stuff there like stone sword keys and everything I bought a torch
And my brother bought a stone sword COOL! said brother then we went off Then we
Saw Bilbo Baggins,Frodo, Sam,Legolas,Thorin,,kili and fili were fighting Azog the Defiler it was a statue but they looked fabulous I like Frodo because he look so paranoid and his his first finger got chopped off and my beast villain is Azog the defiler because he has pimples in his body Rashes and his body and his muddy and pimply he also has snot dried up it was so fun said brother and after that we went home.
Thank you for hearing my writing story if you LIKED! This story then please put this in my comments below or if You DON'T LIKE! this video then ummmm ummm then I will Curse you nah I won't do that Thank You Very very much Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Tuesday, March 8, 2016
my draft 2
A Surprise Visit
WARNING AO or PG This can make you very sick and make your heart come out your mouth please continue only if you are over and under 20 enjoy. On day my family said let's go to our aunty house Then we packed some food up. Let's go said my brother then we went to Auckland. Few hour later the car swerlled what the hell! I feel like going to vomit like hell. We stop at Whangarei we had KFC,MCDonald,Pizza,Drink and Bakehouse.Then my mum decided to go to shopping in the Mall because it will be fun in there then we went to shopping in the mall .When we arrived at the mall mum went to the
jewelry shop dad went to Hunting & Fishing and me and my
brother went to the warehouse to by some Nerf Gun we
had 400 dollars I had a Star War Nerf Gun and my brother had the ornery Nerf Gun then we buyed all the stuff we need and we head off to auckland
Then we arrived at Auckland my brother saw the sky he said
I wish I could own the Sky Tower only if you study hard said
mum OK! said my my brother. Few minute later we have
approach to my aunty house then I said can I ring the
DOOR BELL! yes you can then DING DING! after that vomit at
aunty dress, green slimy juicy BUUUUUUUUUCK! mum got so Embarrassed
NAUGHTY BOY! said aunty mum started to laugh RUN! we ran of
GET IN THE CAR! said dad then we drove off we got so paranoid that day And that day was a disgusting and horrible day of my life time it
was pretty funny but the good news is we escaped from
aunty but the bad news is the I am banded of nerf gun and
got whack in the bottom by aunty that was a terrifying day.
This is my second draft. I still need teacher's help to proof-read
Sorry it is up the wrong way. I will post my writing again.
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