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Friday, May 13, 2016

A Very Interesting Story That You Should Read.


Planning Stage


Who      Where   When    What   
Who my mum,my brother and my dad
Where at home at the backyard in the dark
When at Saturday 7 pm at night
The mood at the beginning is eerie


  1. Main Event/idea my brother sneaking up on me while I was feeding my guinea pig
  • My feelings I want to show: I was nervous The mood I want to have is suspense


2. Main Event/idea getting attacked by my brother
My feeling I want to show surprise/anger


3. Main Event/idea getting back at my brother
My feeling I want to show is cheeky and happy





In the Holidays at 7 pm one cold ,dark ,foggy, windy and mysterious night dad told me this, “Aryan! Go and feed  Vanilla and Catberry’’.    “Yes dad” I said with my small shivering squeaky voice.  Meanwhile unknown to me  This is the TIME to freak Aryan out thought my little brother ONCE AND FOR ALL MUA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He jumped out the window.  I wore my black bandana, leather jacket, camo hat, glasses and leather gloves and I also carried my nerf guns. “Aryan why are You getting all of that stuff and why are you wearing odd clothes?” said mum. ‘
Original mask of Guy Fawkes“Incase my brother sneaks up on me i said He won't do that said mum. "He better not do it I said then I got scissors and went outside with my nerf gun and I cut some grass. Soon after I had cut the grass for VanilIa and Catberry I heard a noise shhhhhhhhh! It was a bush shaking! I shivered in fear. I went to Vanila and Catberry's house then I heard footsteps coming right at me TRIP TRAP TRIP TRAP!
My Hands shook dropping all the grass down to the ground. Then when I turned I saw someone  wearing vendetta mask and a black jacket and holding a crowbar!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I felt so paranoid that I would nearly pooped in my pants! Then a nerf gun bullet came out of the bush. I picked it up .
A nerf bullet I said in a shocking voice. Something is stalking me. I pointed my nerf gun at the bush. My brother wearing a vendetta mask jumped out with a nerf gun “you little pee stain”! I shouted at my brother while he chased me around the compound, in the backyard and front yard and into  the house. My brother yelled, “come on fight like a man or are you a scared?  that's understandable”
Take that! I shot the nerf bullet  at him. “ Mommy” he yelled as he ran towards her “That's right you got nothing that's right get your punk attitude back to mommy you got nothing .” I shouted out loud .


That evening  was the scariest night of my lifetime but the good news is I got my brother is back and he had to say sorry for  scaring me. The bad news is I had to do chores for a whole day.Thank you for listening to
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