A Very Interesting Story That You Should Read.

Planning Stage

Who      Where   When    What   

Who my mum,my brother and my dad

Where at home at the backyard in the dark

When at Saturday 7 pm at night

The mood at the beginning is eerie

1. Main Event/idea my brother sneaking up on me while I was feeding my guinea pig

• My feelings I want to show: I was nervous The mood I want to have is suspense

2. Main Event/idea getting attacked by my brother

My feeling I want to show surprise/anger

3. Main Event/idea getting back at my brother

My feeling I want to show is cheeky and happy

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In the Holidays at 7 pm one cold ,dark ,foggy, windy and mysterious night dad told me this, “Aryan! Go and feed  Vanilla and Catberry’’.    “Yes dad” I said with my small shivering squeaky voice.  Meanwhile unknown to me  This is the TIME to freak Aryan out thought my little brother ONCE AND FOR ALL MUA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He jumped out the window.  I wore my black bandana, leather jacket, camo hat, glasses and leather gloves and I also carried my nerf guns. “Aryan why are You getting all of that stuff and why are you wearing odd clothes?” said mum. ‘

“Incase my brother sneaks up on me i said He won't do that said mum. "He better not do it I said then I got scissors and went outside with my nerf gun and I cut some grass. Soon after I had cut the grass for VanilIa and Catberry I heard a noise shhhhhhhhh! It was a bush shaking! I shivered in fear. I went to Vanila and Catberry's house then I heard footsteps coming right at me TRIP TRAP TRIP TRAP!

My Hands shook dropping all the grass down to the ground. Then when I turned I saw someone  wearing vendetta mask and a black jacket and holding a crowbar!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I felt so paranoid that I would nearly pooped in my pants! Then a nerf gun bullet came out of the bush. I picked it up .

A nerf bullet I said in a shocking voice. Something is stalking me. I pointed my nerf gun at the bush. My brother wearing a vendetta mask jumped out with a nerf gun “you little pee stain”! I shouted at my brother while he chased me around the compound, in the backyard and front yard and into  the house. My brother yelled, “come on fight like a man or are you a scared?  that's understandable”

Take that! I shot the nerf bullet  at him. “ Mommy” he yelled as he ran towards her “That's right you got nothing that's right get your punk attitude back to mommy you got nothing .” I shouted out loud .

That evening  was the scariest night of my lifetime but the good news is I got my brother is back and he had to say sorry for  scaring me. The bad news is I had to do chores for a whole day.Thank you for listening to

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I will call my brother to stalk you in the house nah just kidding THANK YOU!

this my writing for term 1.

This story make me very very excited and I feel like you are going to this enjoy it! One day I went to the hobbit with my family around matamata my brother got so hungry so we stopped at the KFC. My brother eats like a beast. After we ate all the the chicken from KFC we went to matamata hobbiton we start off by going in the bus We were going to the hobbiton the bus driver was driving very fast.Then we approached hobbiton we looked inside the the hobbit hole it was so tiny that anybody can not fit In.Then we went in to bilbo baggins hole it was sorta big but anybody can fit in. After that we went to this place that you can do heaps of stuff there are barrel’s m j with bears and there a place like a bar. That you can drink there are beers and ginger beers and it called The Green Dragon when we went inside it looked beautiful one odd lady showed us all around we got so thirsty and dehydrated then she took us this place that I drank ginger beer YUM! Said myself. Then we went on the bus and then we went to this shop that has heaps of stuff that they used for the hobbit.When we approached to the store it was very very Amazing. There was stuff there like stone sword keys and everything I bought a torch And my brother bought a stone sword COOL! said brother then we went off Then we Saw Bilbo Baggins,Frodo, Sam,Legolas,Thorin,,kili and fili were fighting Azog the Defiler it was a statue but they looked fabulous I like Frodo because he look so paranoid and his his first finger got chopped off and my beast villain is Azog the defiler because he has pimples in his body Rashes and his body and his muddy and pimply he also has snot dried up it was so fun said brother and after that we went home. Thank you for hearing my writing story if you LIKED! This story then please put this in my comments below or if You DON'T LIKE! this video then ummmm ummm then I will Curse you nah I won't do that Thank You Very very much Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Tuhi Mai, Tuhi Atu.

Today we are learning to use Kawa of care, here is our group's comic we made

my draft 2

A Surprise Visit

WARNING AO or PG This can make you very sick and make your heart come out your mouth please continue only if you are over and under 20 enjoy. On day my family said let's go to our aunty house Then we packed some food up.  Let's go said my brother then we went to Auckland. Few hour later the car swerlled what the hell! I feel like going to vomit like hell. We stop at Whangarei we had KFC,MCDonald,Pizza,Drink   and Bakehouse.Then my mum decided to go to shopping in the Mall because it will be fun in there  then we went to shopping in the mall .When we arrived at the mall mum went to the

jewelry shop dad went to Hunting & Fishing and me and my

brother went to the warehouse to by some Nerf Gun we

had 400 dollars I had a Star War Nerf Gun and my brother had  the ornery Nerf Gun then we buyed all the stuff we need and we head off to auckland

Then we arrived at Auckland my brother saw the sky he said

I wish I could own the Sky Tower only if you study hard said

mum OK! said my my brother. Few minute later we have

approach to my aunty house then I said can I ring the

DOOR BELL! yes you can then DING DING! after that vomit at

aunty dress, green slimy juicy BUUUUUUUUUCK!  mum got so Embarrassed

NAUGHTY BOY! said aunty mum started to laugh RUN! we ran of

GET IN THE CAR! said dad then we drove off we got so paranoid that day And that day was a disgusting and horrible day of my life time it

was pretty funny but the good news is we escaped from

aunty but the bad news is the I am banded of nerf gun and

got whack in the bottom by aunty that was a terrifying day.

This is my second draft. I still need teacher's help to proof-read

Sorry it is up the wrong way.  I will post my writing again.